Altier; Afterstory | "Our Fruits of Pandora" |
A tale of how three boys from different places and backstory will bond together through trial and error to become the most powerful and influential gang over Juggernaut City. Through this bloody battle for Pandora's Box these boys will come to be brothers-in-arms who will fight and fend for each other. Zeno Ohgi James ~~~ Its something I'm throwing together with a help of a special friend. Its my first book I'm publishing and it still in the works here and there so take it easy on any harsh critcism. I'm not the best with English, but I do proofread alot so please forgive any grammer mistakes. This book has a first person perspective into the character arcs which are divided by acts. When you see the name of an act the perspective shifts into that character first person view. Please take this note of this as I was unable to find a way to naturally write this into the story. (Cough cough https://discord.gg/8HZmDGzK cough cough)
Construction Notice!
So I need to say this.
First off....
Damn, its already been two months since I last uploaded a chapter here, huh. Time sure does fly, I guess.
You see when I first wrote this book, it was more so a "let's see where this takes me" kind of situation. Especially since back then I wasn't as particularly good with my grammer as I am now....and even then I still have a long way to go.
To put things simply, I didn't really plan ahead of how I wanted to take this book, and by the time I had a decent idea of it, I began working on The Alchemist Codex and we all know how that situation went down.
(cough cough, which I totally recommend you go read cough cough.)
And to those who don't know, basically I was pretty much writing without thinking far ahead so my story wasn't at the best quality where I wanted it to be.
The same situation now applies here since it was the first book I tried writing "professionally", I suppose. Regardless, after several long months, I decided; "Alright, I know I have gotten a bit better with my writing so why don't I just remake Trinity?"
(Trinity of Juggernaut was the original name by the way.)
And, holy shit is it working out in my favor.
Now I won't say anything special or pointlessly gaslight myself just for me to flop in the end, but I will say this.
Our Fruits of Pandora is going to become a very ambitious change then what Trinity had previously, while also retaining its original, albeit much more refined, plotline.
I will be gracious enough to give yall light teasers as to whats coming in the near future.
"The Seeds of Pandora"
"Our Fruits of Pandora"
"The King and Her Beloved Subjects"
Remember these phrases as they will play significiant importance to the story that will unfold, if everything goes according to plan. Until then, this book is pretty much under construction and will be remade into something pretty much different then what you've seen.
However unlike what I did with Alchemist, I do plan to keep the original chapters up for a little while longer until I'm ready with the new batch.
After all, I still need that view count.
Why you think I changed the thumbnail to a girl? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)