Reviews of ALTERNIVERSE (Original Short Story)

Was confused at the start because I wasn't expecting a fight between Jin and Kerish, especially after how last chapter went. But great chap overall. Loved how detailed this fight was, and we all know who won this fight lol. JIN! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Oh boy things are heating up now. It's time for a major battle to begin. I CAN'T WAIT! (AWESOME CHAPTER!) [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Good chapter, was really surprised at the end with the whole point aether thing. This goes to show how we still no so little about everyone's back stories. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Such a good aftermath chapter, got to see what happened to the heroes left unconscious (1 dead) and those who got away. I'm glad we saw Zero again he's definitely going to get his shine soon, but I'm glad he's seeing how dangerous the field can be, but I feel we are close to something happening. A big change is coming and it's going to be BIG. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

I love the transition from last week! Still questions about how some of the fight went down but that makes me want to know so much more about Transmuter! And I love finding more about Phins aura! Can’t wait for the next chapter! Godhood awaits!!

Wow amazing chapter, this went from zero to 100 real quick, poor freddie he honestly never stood chance. Someone needs to physically abuse everchange, preferably a man. She can't be forgiven. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

Detective dan on the case, looks like hes on his way to finding out how much of a sum River bark is lol. Great chapter bro. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Loving it bro, felt really bad for this jose guy, my dude was put into the infinite tysukiomi for a sec. But Shay and Mat hitting off was pretty cool. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

From here on out Zero will only get stronger to protect his ideals... and those in need. I love the way this chapter ended looks like the heroes will have to deal with something far worse in the future...... (KORTHAX!) [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

BROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPOOOOOOOOOOOO, YOU NEED TO CHILL THIS CHAPTER HAD ME ELECTRIFIED AND HOT AF. FAVORITE CHAPTER BY FAR! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Great chapter kinda felt bad for those crooks lol, they got bodied lol HAPPY THANKSGIVING! ❤🔥[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Oh boy.... it just keeps getting better and better from this point on. Really messed with jins entrance. It was pretty dope. Wonder how the next chapter will be 🔥🔥🔥🔥

Oh god, next chapter will be chaotic. The suspense is killing me! 🔥🔥🔥 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

I got goosebumps when transmuter said what he said... "we're going on a jail break." Just cold yo! Can't wait for the next chapter.🔥🔥🔥🔥[img=update]

Feels like I'm watching everything happen up close. Really gets me hype. So far I'm enjoying all the characters you've introduced and can't wait to see when things get crazy. [img=update]