Neil_Ads
Has this novel been dropped? I would be very sad if it was I was really enjoying this world the author created I hope if anyone has info they can let me know! I would greatly appreciate it π I am up to i think 260 right now and so far the characters are great and the story is very well made! The MC is interesting and I love his companions. β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦_______________________________________βββββββββββββββββββββββ-!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is my opinion if you dont agree just read the Novel. Ive Read 40 chapters so far. In my opinion its not that gd of a story to invest uf time in and definetly not Worth Paying for. the chapters are short abd the story develops slowly. As of the 40 chapters we barely know anything about mc goal apart from there some powerful person or family or organisation that killed his family and he wants revenge. Charcter development kinda sucks if im honest the mc seems shallow abd theres not much too him. Based on those two points i decided to drop it, if it was free It could be seen as a book to get by but i cant see why id invest coins into the book. This is only be opinion, so if you dont like It then read it but i wouldnt recommend.
I like the the general idea of the the novel,but, like other reviews i read i absolutely agree on the fact that the pacing is way too slow.after over 100 chapters the mc should have gone trough a lot more stuff. I mean seriously does it really take 10 chapters for a mc to hitch a ride go to the market sell his stuff and go back home?
How can this novel gets translated while other with higher votes in the rating poll gets removed. Story progress is so slow and inconsistent. The world building is inconsistent characters are to bland and generic. None of the characters actually stand out. Even people with worse naming sense are more consistent than this one. from Bob to Valkyrie or something be consistent or in theme. The little of details can break of character. Not worth investing your read time would be better if your choose other novel compared to this.
its an Interesting premise, really cool world, filled with Interesting characters. I would say bottom line read it, but the lack of updates, slow story progression after a certain number of chapters and now months of nothing at all, idk. you should put it in your library and if you see updates at some piont start reading. really want to see we're this thing goes.
The main character is likeable, kinda dumb at times bit that's perfect for 16 year old , it would be irritating if he would be too smart or ruthless. But the pacing is getting slower and slower , the side characters are also being beautifully developed, the system is too omniscient though, I had only one issue with it that the pacing is too slow , it been more than 100+ chapters but it hasn't even been a week in the novel , the length of the updates are too short and it's only one chapter a day or two , seriously dusturbs the flpw of the reader