Alma

The good read and my kind of webnovel i love the characters especially the plot twist! I also live the artistic and lively visuals being illustrated as the story goes.

Pretty good story, good writing. But the mc makes little sense in his decisions and does not seem to mind being treated as a mushroom and is way to forgiving for being assaulted for no good reason and ignored and being tortured. It is to annoying and I find it more unbelievable then the magic, unless he is a serious masochist which has not been indicated. I am dropping, I wish the author well he seems talented.

The good read and my kind of webnovel i love the characters especially the plot twist! I also live the artistic and lively visuals being illustrated as the story goes.

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This is good. This is good, and that it.

I don't really know what to do when I review stuff, so I'll be brief. This story is good. Really good. The grammar is top-notch and, from what I could tell, lacked any major grammar mistakes. If you told me that the author had a professional editor and cleaner, I'd believe you. The characters are interesting and the dialogue flows well. Nothing seems broken up, overall. Fascinating world from a great author. It definitely helps that you can tell English is a primary language for this author, and that they don't overwork themselves. I know how valuable inspiration can be, and when people write without any inspiration at all, it shows. Top notch novel, absolutely added to my collections for later.