I love to book. The background and plot are amazing. There have been no grammer mistakes. I love it, please don’t drop it.
it is so good😢 I really hope you will continue this, I'm begging you!!🙏🙏🙏🙏
Eu gosto bastante, mas parando pra pensar, ñ tem nada especial que me passa gostar desta obra, acho que só o conceito que é interessante. Recomendo bastante ler, pois até a parte em que cheguei tá bem legal.
this is a really good novel and i love the concept too a super advanced hive mind and that he came from another universe or the Warhammer i say warhammer because hes previous universe is very similar its sad that hes focusing on a trashy novel tho i really dont like system novels that came out of nowhere i want system novels that at least has a little logic to it like this novel he got a system because of a chip not like the ones where a loser out of nowhere gets a system and gets all powerful and gets lots of girls i hate those kind of novels but i love this one
Unsure? Just read the first chapter; you'll be able to tell whether you'll like it or not upon reading the first few sentences. From what I've seen so far, this is the best story I've seen on this app. Not a high bar, but this is still absolutely amazing. A few uncommon grammatical errors here and there but everything else is fine. Read it.
Amazing novel and story. Writing style is top tier unlike most top novels on WebNovel. 100% up there in terms of writing and storytelling. I love the personalitones of every character. Probably one of my novels by far. This deserves more recognition. If there was a novel I would pay for, it would be this one. I didn’t get irked at all by cringe or unnecessary cliches.
this is a very well thought out and written story that is unique, giving you a break from the generic evolution and growth stories that you'll find on this site, there is a transmigration tag which should not be there cause the main character doesn't die and reincarnate instead he suffers major injuries from a high level battle resulting in him losing all his power and is forced to grow and evolve on the new world he finds himself in. The character starts off without emotion, just a cold blooded killer who is calculated and only has one objective to evolve and get stronger so he can consume the planet and reach out to the collective however as the story progresses, the character slowly starts to experience different emotions as he spends a longer time detached from the collective developing some individuality along the way and becoming his own character, the story hasn't gotten that far yet so he is still in his early stages of development but the growth is noticeable.
Its an impressive piece of work and art, long chapters with plenty of stuff happening, lots of background information sometimes UNDER the chapter, so dont always skip it. The fights are pretty well done and the power curve feels right. Writer cares about his story and rating, which makes me anxious of him getting burnout. My only complaint would be a lack of pressure on the MC, you simply know he will win or simply run away if needed, SPOILER AHEAD to clarify with one example When that one dude escapes and you know he will get hunted, he is basically out of the area probably and i wished for that to happen earlier
Great novel, can't really find any fault in the writing. And if u want to read about a magical alien in a different world, who can evolve and can evolve others. . . this is ur novel to read. Try it and you wouldn't regret it
This is gold right here unique in every way possible if you stop writing this I will be sad honestly it's that good[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I have to say that you did a really good job on this. 5 star worthy story, keep up the good work! The story behind each character is done very well, better than almost all the other stories that I've read on this site. And the main character's character is done especially well.
Exquisite writing, great character and world building, no giant plot holes. If u want to read about an evolving monster who can use magic without the cliche story of a chinese LN, definitely recommend this.
honestly, I'm absolutely in love with the character, the setting, the lore and the absolutely massive potential of this novel. a truly alien protagonist. it's fu**ing spectacular!
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I really liked and loved the story is amazing and flowing very well, the story of the world of the plot is flawless, with many aspects for us to interest us, the characters don't need to change much is nice like that, the purple demon the interaction between them is good for now, i really liked it, i hope it stays that way
Normally i wouldn't write a review but i keep seeing low ratings that always come the first 10-20 chapters, so here i am telling you to read to at least chapter 60 before writing a review, seriously though this novel is amazing just read it.
First of all I’ve gotta say that I’m a huge fan of this novel (currently my 1st favorite on the list) as the mc is also non-humanoid and not like all other storys where the mc is mostly human (it almost seems like most authors shy away from non-human mcs, even though I don’t know why they don’t just give it a try). So there is really a lot of details in the story which lets you imagine it pretty easily in my opinion. The grammar quality is suberp, haven’t seen it too often on the website Webnovel so the guarantee on the quality is there (the confidence the author has shown on this part is rightfull and not just some nonsense). The mc (collector) is ruthless, intelligent, calm, shows almost no emotion like love, anger, nervousness or sympathy (might change a bit later, not too sure on this one lol) and he is developing his strength and personality slowly which is very interesting to read as there aren’t any rapid changes to him (he also seems to be starting to doubt the collective in the later chapters) I hope the novel continues and is finished, not like some of my other favorite non-human novels which dropped without even giving any announcements... I also hope that the novel stays as great as it is or get even better.
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Honestly this is the first time a webnovel has made me feel emotion towards the story, with its perfect writing and story development i cant but help feel invested. the end of the first volume was very emotional but i cant wait for further volumes and developments.