I've got nothing but positives to say about this fic, and I'm being genuine here. From the top, the writing quality is top notch, smooth as buttah and very pleasing. I'm no English teacher but I couldn't spot any grammar errors, or anything amiss with the punctuality. Brownie points for the massive chapters too!
I never personally cared about the "Stability of Updates'' criteria, but for the sake of the review I'll go over it. That being said, this fic only has 5 chapters as of right now, and going by the app, chapters one and two were released within 24h of each other, chapters three and four were released 9 days later, both within 24h of each other as well. Chapter 5 was released 20h ago and 10 days from the last. Needless to say, this is as stable as it gets, an already impressive feat considering the length of the chapters.
On to the next part. The developments have me hooked for good, the very first lines of chapter one had me captured and it's only gotten better since. The developments flow seamlessly together, nothing seems to contradict and it all makes sense. There are extremes, but in my personal opinion, this is a realistic take on the Shinobi world and all of it is impeccably developed.
The character design is awesome, for all Naruto fans, the way to their hearts is a cool looking doujutsu, no ifs ands or buts. A mysterious looking byakugan, the white hair, the elegance, all of it just fits well together to make who we know as Agni. That being said, the cannon characters all feel fleshed out, they aren't ooc and all of them add to the story and its progression. Amazing job!
The world background and the building of it is very well done, it's worded in a way that isn't confusing, and it actually paints a picture for us. Whether it's the world as a whole or just a scene in the moment, then again this might just be me being biased, I've always had a vivid imagination.
All that being said, an incredibly solid 5 star review for this new fic. I am sooooooo looking forward to reading more.
