Tangerines and Watermelons
Its great interesting to read but character development is disappointing sine it seems he thinks with his pants Try making his character development a little bit ruthless cunning scheming for with his personality he wont reach far For outsourcing try reading 'scoring the sacred body of the ancients from the get-go' its character development is great Also since he is from a parallel world why try bringing in the existence of different worlds corresponding to different mythology so to bring consistency
this story is overall very bad. too many plot holes, inconsistent growth, sawdust flavored personalities, inconsistent translation, mc overpowered like one chapter in, untied story elements, paper thin setting, inconsistent character knowledge, just a bad read. would not recommend to people with eyes.
It is the typical average cultivation novel, a protagonist who becomes boring without character development, I seriously prefer a thousand times a 100% lustful protagonist since in those novels at least they do have character development. By the way half angel? what a joke 𤣠that is a complete demon.
Overall: Don't waste your time reading this novel Writing quality: It seems a machine-translated novel. Story development: There are way too many plot holes and it's REALLY predictable with almost nothing interesting... And the few interesting situations are completely ignored for no reason. Character design: HAHAHAHA, what a joke, it doesn't exist here. Update stability: I don't know since I've just started reading this novel not too long ago, however... It doesn't matter anyway. World background: It's the only decent thing about this novel, yet there are way too many plot holes and I cannot judge since I haven't read enough
I have read lots of stories but I have never came across such trash one. The writing is so confusing. Lots and Lots of mistakes. The world build is even more trash. It just gets my head spinning. I tried to give a chance by reading up to chapter 50 or something like that but it didn't get better. I do not recommend this unless you want to waste your time.