Beautiful At The Beginning Of The Month
Don't normally do early reviews, but must admit to really wanting this one to be picked. It is a little unusual, the main leads are cards, while we have the usual evil stepsister, the FL is suave in their dealings, and the FLs gramps and the MLs family are freaking hilarious. Fingers crossed this one makes it, and it maintains the humour and quality.
Good work author! 😍😍😍😍 I am a fan of the authors other work, 'HAM-IMWCS' and this doesn't lose to it at all. Now coming to the story, The writing and character design are both top-notch. There is a stepsister trope, but the father seems to be sane. I have long been annoyed of some other stories where the characters are said to be 'smart' while they are naive/dense/silly. Here, the characters are actually intelligent instead of being claimed as they are. It is still early, but it has an excellent potential. Hope this story gets picked up.
It was good at the beginning...but the story is really slow...I did read the raw being attracted to the story..who knows its really slow and meaning less...The MC father and ML solves most of the problems..she is just incharge of looking good.. sometimes for making it different she shows some aggressiveness...else it's the same