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After rolling my eyes through so many stories where the FL is a doctor/singer/hacker/gamer/etc. that speaks 30 languages, it’s a breath of fresh air to have a grounded, realistic FL. Fang Ya is a woman who couldn’t catch a break after her divorce and lived a hard life. Upon going back in time, she strives to make all the right decisions this time. She’s no genius, but she’s a smart, sensible woman who’s learned from the mistakes of her previous life. The pacing is a bit slow, so the story is only really getting started after 40 chapters, but what I’ve read so far gives me hope that this will turn out to be a good read.
It's kind of annoying that the author keeps calling the neighbor the large woman or fat woman and never gives her a proper name. Also that MC decided to forgive her stepmom without her ever saying I'm sorry for having sold you in the past and everything I did before and also to help her stepbrother was a crazy decision in my opinion... But so far is ok to read in your free time, is not the best but also not the worst.
I've read the trial story.. and I really like it.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ can someone tell me is it an original story or is it a translated ? if it's a translated, anyone got the raw???? if it's an original, I hope the author will write it till finish, and make it into a hiatus like others stories that I read😭😭😭
The first 40 chapters were really good, story was developing, there was also relationship building involved, and the story was well paced. That's where the good things end, after chapter 40 it gets very, very lackluster. The story is all over the place, new characters are not even described (Li Tong), the story is all over the place, nothing is explained, a ton of time skips, not to mention children do not appear at all. Story that was about childcre, her wanting to change her relationship with her daughter and... in the end she barely even appears. Overall nice concept that gets you excited but the longer you read the more you realise how bad and lackluster it gets.
I'm honestly perplexed at this point. It started really well, I liked it very much. But now the FL doesn't seem like she was in the beginning. all her resolutions seem vain, she just stands there, not doing anything, she just cries and wants someone to rely on. I don't say it's wrong wanting to have someone to rely on, but you want back in time, you lived in an era where you saw that women has the power to stand for themselves and rely on their men when they are in search of comfort but aren't solely relying on them. I don't know. I'm going to continue for now, but if this goes on, I'm going to drop it.
I've been keeping up with the recent updates. The story is simple in terms of the characters. By that I mean that FL is an ordinary person & isn't necessarily looking for revenge but rather to live her life with her child. Her & ML weren't looking for love so I know this is a slow burn but rather than focusing on the development of their relationship it's more focused on the cases that ML is involved in. They hardly spend time together & when they talk it's about those cases. If you're not a patient reader, then this story isn't for you.
So this nvel is about a divorce woman who was reborn and make a decision that her second chance in life she'll let go her past, just take what she deserves and care for those who looks out for her👍 So I really this novel will continue. I want to read more about the relationship between the mc and ml and especially the kids too, and what happen to that scum brother of hers🤬 so pls vote for this novel, I feel like iits a pretty good story🙏🤓🤓
at first it was a nice rebirth novel no revenge no lengthy nonsense thing! i thought it was a slice of life where she would be enjoying her new life embracing new thing and getting a new job been kinda busy with little to do with no drama! but then bam it takes a sharp turn for me I don't know how to explain the FL character she feels like she needs to help everyone like it's her responsibility to make them achieve things in life! at first i like she just gave the ml some hint and help him though he didn't need her help cause obviously at past life he achieved everything without her helps ! but then she helps him and meddle in things that doesn't concerne her and then let her step mom family threaten her and make her guide them in the investment , she always putting herself and family in danger ! sometime i feel like she doesn't think and Judy go with the flow!! i just couldn't keep with it after troible comes up left to right without prior notice and she has to meddle in everything like a goody2choice or she feel like she is a peacemaker girl or something