Aegis Schnee The Juggernaut Of Glyphs

This is not HP fanfick. There is very minimal amount of HP lore and style here. Author butchered anything that resemblet HP style. MC is OP and its cringe ... you can feel forcefullnes of mc in everything he do. Forced plot and relly pointless. Nathing is explained well its all as if author writed from his head without any planing.

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I love how author handled the mix more universes in this. Wish there was more interaction/Slice of Life type chapters in between regular ones

The grammer is god awful. It is very very bad, if I took out a red pen most of the book would be inked(mainly early chaps) However if you jenga piece it together the story can be good at times.

moar lemon, please author-sama ...........................................................................................................................................

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Fairly interesting story with quite a bit of potential...I have definitely enjoyed it so far, however, the quality of the English used is quite abysmal and is in urgent need of an editor..just having an editor alone would definitely make it a 4/5 or higher story

A very interesting rwby fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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awful everything, world is one dimensional, characters are one dimensional, plot is forced into a direction where it doesn't need to go, mc is unreasonable.

yooo... are you still alive????are you still alive man.............................................are you still alive....

Keep up the good work your doing amazing in your work

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Gracias al autor por existir y gracias por crear esta historia está genial y es el mejor fanfic que e leído eres grande autor esperaré con ansias el siguiente cap :D

If I could give you less than 1 star I'd do it in an instant this is one of the worst fanfic I have ever read

Im just happy you are back!!!!!!!!!! ..................................................................................................................................................................................

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Love the story!! Better plots, better characters, better development all over!! Writings needs a few work and bam* We got the best RWBY fanfic.. [[Just a question for thought :- Why didn't you add the knowledge relic (which is a jinn in lamb that can answer three questions for a century and have many knowledge or very knowledgeable) in the library (royal library?) where this relic may show some kind of usefulness?

I like the story and the way multiverse is being introduce but I the only problem of mc is him being to subservient to girls and like if they just offer their self to him even if he knows that they just want something from him just accept. He is also a bit hypocrite saying he loves his family but just accept any girls even if their time is shorten in meet up.