lynerparel
One of the top....Top tier characters with lots of funny misunderstanding and many serious moments...as well as super cool mc and his friends, family and last his top killer Dad...You would die in excitement.. I recommend you to just read only 10 chapters max and You decided whether to read further or not. You won't regret!!! And one thing I am also a author...A Monster In A Human..this is my novel, pls check it out...Sorry for the promotion author san.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Iâve been with this novel for awhile, I joined a bit late. But was still early relatively speaking. The author, Lyner, has some serious talent. This sense of having a fully fleshed out plan, along with proper amounts of foreshadowing, without giving away arcs, I have yet to see be pulled off quite as well. Not only that, but the novel itself is rather original. It takes basics such as F-SS mercenary ranks, and someone makes it feel completely new. The characters you meet donât feel bland, even the ones not given a name, and the main characters have personality and âoomphâ. Literally the only slight knock off is how Lyner just hasnât really gotten a chance to flesh out the countries yet. And even that is minor with the current story flow. Overall, this is an easy 10/10 in my book. Thanks for the novel, Lyner!
Alas this was a very solid story at least in my opinion especially with it being written by someone who isn't a pro. There are some faults here and there sure but unfortunately getting to the chapters locked by the dreaded SS pay wall after blasting through it in a couple hours just killed it for me. Maybe it would be different if there were more chapters before that but since there was only 90ish before running into the pay wall. It's a freaking shame I very much enjoyed the story but I just don't have the patience to wait for the free ones or the money to buy them. I know my opinion doesn't matter in the grand scheme of things but I think you are cutting yourself from potential readers but going premium will do exactly that. Regardless your call and though I will probably drop it until that changes I just wanted to use the first review I've ever done to tell that regardless of my feelings on the pay wall I legitimately enjoyed the story and hope you keep at it this story has potential. Coming from someone whose basically only hobby is reading that should say it all no?
This. Is. Gold. Its slice of life with spice! (and so much more) I expected nothing from the story, exept killing my boredom for a short wile. But god i was blind. The writing style is really good. The flow is amazing, and it keeps you wanting more. The first chap is only 4 pages, but damn i got hooked after it. The dynamics between the chars and the characters them selfes are , while not completely refraining from common tropes and cliches, well thought out and refreshingly written. I especially love the relationship between alex and his dad. This book is perfect for a chill evening and has quite alot of wholesome moments... Beside the crazy merc intermissions. All in all, you should defenitley give this one a try. You, author deserve a medal. Ps.dont forget its comedy!
now sigh when i read this novel i think its good but something makes me frown a bit hahah at first think it is a uniwue novel but until i read 40 % of chapter i think its story mmmm have a similar theme of the anime school irregularity nahh i didnt remember the exact title but its only my perspective though correct me if im wrong hahahah
I feel that the author has done a great job so far, everything is truly wonderful and there are very few fillers if any (I might have missed them but that just proves how good they are). The book is very entertaining and it doesn't get boring with new things being added every couple of chapter. TLDR: It's a good book, read it. and give it stones