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Acnefera - Retcon

So I wrote Acnefera. The grammar was awful. The spelling was inconsistent and I am going to rewrite it. it is going to make more sense and it's going to be better with more fleshed-out characters and better motivations better villains. I'm going to rewrite the story even better. So enjoy

Greater_Oat · Fantasy
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4 Chs

The start of a new thing

The bus moved around the streets. Picking up students and adults as the bus when from stop to stop. The 25 bus dinged as people came on and off.

The best reached Longacre Place where the bus flooded with students. A guy that was about 5'5 in height had been there since Lynmouth heights.

He was wearing an ironed white button-up with black trousers. He also donned a black clip-on tie. He had black cornrows and light skin.

A girl that was around 5'4 sat down next to the guy. She also had an ironed white button-up and black trousers. She had a black clip-on tie and she had a noticeable bust.

She had white skin and long brown hair. The guy thought why him? Out of all the seats why him? He looked out of the window as the announcement system came on.

"This is a none stop run from here to the end of the bridge. This bus will not stop until Edge Warren square. This bus terminates at Eden Law station."

The announcement finished and the bus closed its doors. The girl turned to look at the guy. More people filled the bus and the bus doors closed.

The bus hovered over the bridge as the golden rays shone through the bus windows. The water reflected the golden light as a ship blew its fog horn.

The bus hovered over the bridge. The hovering bus stopped at a red light. They waited for 10 seconds before the light turned green.

The bus continued past the skyscrapers. As the morning light made them look majestic. The bus stopped at Edge Warren square. Most of the adults swarmed the open back doors.

"So I don't really know anyone here." The guy turned to look at the cute girl. "What's your name?" The guy was startled by her sudden question.

"My name is Stas." The girl responded, "My name is Sylvia. Since we are wearing the same uniform you are also a first-year I assume?" Stas nodded as Sylvia smiled.

"Next stop Edge Law Station. The bus will terminate at the next stop. Don't forget your belongings." The system proclaimed.