Angelica2511
It's a great book, it hooked me up since chapter one. I've a great felling for this book, the start made me sad, but after a minute of reading, relief filled my heart. It's not like the abandoned wife who had an accident and the husband is ruthless and left her alone, no.... (writing more will be a spoiler...) It makes me want to read more! Keep going, dear author.
Love this book. Early on sometimes it felt like the characters weren't growing or moving forward at all, but they do get past that if you just don't give up! usually I'm starting to feel burnt out or tired of a book if it goes past 300 chapters, but this one actually just pulls you in deeper the farther it goes! There are very few grammar and writing mistakes,(less than 1 every 3 chapters) and you can generally pretty easily tell what was meant when there are mistakes. The flow of writing is good, not getting hung up on over explaining things. The characters do grow, change, and mature over time. Enemies get what is coming eventually , not making you wait until the very end to see some payback! I will update when the book is actually finished, but after over 400 chapters, still loving it!
first of all Declan and Yasmin love story called me single in many ways❤️❤️💯☹️. it's one of the best stories I've ever read and I'm sad it ended cause I wanted it to continue so l can read it for ever and ever the story was just splendid l loved how that narrator was able to bring out the character of a person , bring new characters as well as reviewing the secrets and the background stories and the behind the scenes . Not forgetting not being swayed by the comments to making the story the way they wanted it to be just to please the reader. You remained true to your creation .The story evoked many emotions in me l never new l could feel . it wasn't too fictional but just right❤️💯❤️
The synopsis was well written in a way how synopsis should be. Though simple, the themes presented are relatable as they are what our current world is facing. Greed, deception and many other human sins and vulnerabilities. Within all those, there are people who hold on to the righteous values. It is the clashes of these values that require the lead characters to work and fight for what their hearts desire. Well narrated that prompts readers to reflect on life (should one choose to do so).
I liked this novel from the very beginning bc it started off with a shocker. It was in its own way the typical beginning, but the twist was that the husband returned home to his bride drunk, slept with her, but they didn't make drunken love and he regret it and make her feel small the next morning. Yet the author switch and allowed the two to spend the night together and wake up and still have the awkward feelings and still be able to face one another with out the guilt, but still have the sexual tension between the couple. Each still desiring the other, left wondering what the others would feel or taste like once touched. The reader can sense there's going to be excitement between these two individuals bc one, he's an arrogant, powerful alpha male used to having things done his way and two, she a young, strong-willed, honest woman that believes in putting things out there and keeping it real. I'm looking forward to reading more of the author's words to see if my theory is correct about the characters that have been created as the leads.
OH MY GOD!! I loved the beginning of the novel very very much. It literally got me hooked to the novel. Everything in this novel is well written. I will surely keep this book in my library and will be reading it. One advice: Please remove chapter number from the chapter description. WN automatically numbers each chapter.