Abyss Domination

It's an excellent story, but my vision I don't know what happened I just lost interest and like I was always seeing the very thing that got to a point where the story was empty for me I almost don't understand how the world works right, how people can get stronger, it's like the whole story is only focused on a single character than Soran, and one of the things I hate the most and the guy fate thing that is so cloying because it makes it look like everything should be that way it doesn't give you an idea that the character is alive or if his choices play out like a puppet game. The main character I know he must have already evolved in his personality but man I just know he's a cruel killer who only cares about a sister, by the way it's just that, it's like he's just gray he's just there to take drama, at first I felt he was alive, but now I feel he's a puppet who doesn't feel like it. Another problem and the sibling relationship is more like writing than anything else, as it does not demonstrate anything as an action, for example it does not demonstrate what they do, how their conversations are with each other or how far they go to help each other, I did not like the progress of relationship because it does not have, it is very described verbally. It's like meeting two brothers you do know them but very superficially. Give the illusion that what you deviate from as personality or relationship enhancement has happened a long time ago and that we are jumping from beginning to end. It's as if the author wasn't in the mood to write anymore and is just writing for the sake of writing just to finish what he started. Well that's it, I'm going to stop after reading about 300 caps, not because the story is bad because for me it lost its color and became empty. If you read this review I want you to know that I'm not a professional I'm just a tomboy locate in a bed writing how you feel about this story so I hope you understand

I really enjoyed this chapter because the MC has been building himself up to this point since the book began, and he found himself a resident of this world instead of a player

O livro é muito bom, segue um pouco do protagonista frio estilo Magus Warlock Word e Age of adeptos,assim como Gu Master. O problema é que após chegar no livro 2 - 3 você sente que as coisas tão um pouquinho rápido demais em relação ao poder de Soran, muitas vezes o MC repete e repete como ele é fraco e fraco extremamente fraco isso vai enganando você até que percebe o quão rápido ele evoluiu tipo WAHT? Felizmente isso é algo progressivo não do nada, é não comprometer a obra incrível

not bad, got a bit boring as it went though I feel like part of what was initally part of the story and made exciting was lost. ver nice otherwise

First I liked the story reincarnated in the body of another and taking care of a cute little sister. I thougt that after their escape the big brother would succed as an adventurer to earn money etc but the story takes an surprising twist. Because their both from the linage of the gods they get in the middle of the upcoming chaos. For my taste to cruel.

me parece que esta muy bien narrada y es mas que entretenida, también a diferencia de otras novelas siento que no esta toda la novela idolatrando al protagonista si no que nos deja un buen desarrollo del mundo.

The story is nice and all but at some point in the story the mc is too nerfed lyk how can someone who has a system pale in comparison to his own sister and even with the system his strength is just so so. The story is great and all but since I have seen any growth in the mc even after chap 102 I think I will drop this. Thank you✌

This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505

Why did they drop this novel it was about to hit a good curve again finally only to get dropped. Its an amazing ride but i cant suggest people read a half done novel. I’m sticking around for a month and I’ll write another review then.

Ok well where to begin. The novel is pretty good I cant really remember the beginning besides some info dumps for those that aren’t used to Dnd. The pace is pretty good and any slow spell is usually accompanied by some character growth that lets you get a feel for them earlier rather than later. The novel runs into the standard problem of systems with it restricting the writer so he just starts ignoring it until he needs a power spike. I’m not sure if its the author or the translator but rules will randomly get broken more and more often as the story progresses and the quality takes a dive with random paragraphs ending up missing leaving you going what the heck. I think this is also why rules get broken so often is because the translation doesn’t convey the real meaning of certain words. So basically first 300 are good then it starts to dive towards bad as you progress. Finally the translation isn’t complete yet there are no updates. The only way to read more is to spend twenty bucks, and thats not even the ending. The story is half complete and after spending money to read all of this at least give me the rest of the story in its original language machine translated or let some people online finish it. Overall I’d definitely try it but don’t get invested at least until the chapter start coming again.

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