I really liked that the both brother and sister depend on each other back to back with the world against story development. And this novel is quite unique with the sister being more powerful than mc .
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With the current reviews I see, I’m just gonna post this 5 star review. I’ll see if it’s good and i’ll post another review. If I don’t, I dropped this.
Love this novel!! It has a bit of an issue with info dumps, but idm since I don’t play D&D.
I spent a few days to get to chapter 530, although I always read this fast, this was actually a good story. Although you are flooded with dnd things such as levels and skills in the first part it starts to lessen and starts being like part of the story, basically, it doesn't make you want to skip it. The guy who said this story was bad b/c of information flood. Information flood stops if you read a bit and you will get used to it, and most of the time, most, it won't hurt to skip it. I admire how Soran, the protag, helps his sister at all costs, even planning to fight a god (not spoiler cuz it's literally in the first chapter). This isn't harem, although I have nothing against harems, Soran only has one girl up to chapter 530 and story doesn't forget her. Soran doesn't level up too fast or too slow, the pacing is pretty good. The world building is great, you will get used to the world really fast, and keep learning things after. I see few errors, and every characters personality is at least decent, even some characters that are not even important. The plot leaves you satisfied and happy, but the story doesn't do everything you would expect. Overall, this is just a wonderful story, also this is like first or second review ever on any site, so congrats to this great story!!
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Does this novel dropped ? Webnovel should let this novel in Gravity Tales, even it is free, at least it wont get dropped. For those who spend coin on dropped novels, how you feel ? No new chapters for so long 😭
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the current translator is sh*t every scecond or third chapter is missing whole sentences to whole paragraphs. othewise the book is decent
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I really enjoyed this story when reading it but the big issue I found with a story like this is the lack of movement in the story. Not to say anything bad I personally think it’s an amazing story and I enjoy the world background because it allows me to be more immersed in the story and the descriptions are also really cool. It’s just that it tends to deviate from the actual story from time to time but overall a great story
Although the world setting is not anything unique or new, it is well developed, with interesting caracters and a very enjoyable reading experience
One word: belaboring. The entire story is filled with continuous and needless explanations to each and every topic. The author sticks to a single topic and finishes not one but two chapters. It's looks like a first novel in the genre where no one has read anything like it. If the storyline and translation qualities were not very very good, I would've reviewed this one at just 1 star. Even with that fault, the story is very very good. Unfortunately once it becomes paid, I'm dropping it as I can't afford a chapter full of explanations. I've got a dictionary for that.
Pretty interesting premise. The MC is not op right way, there is a pretty progression, doesn't seem forced But FOR FUCKS SAKE, STOP DUMPING USELESS INFORMATION EVERYWHERE. IF IT IS ANYWAY USEFUL FOR THE STORY TO ADVANCE ALRIGHT BUT STOP TALKING ABOUT BRUCE LEE AND NAPOLEON FFFFSSSS
Too much info dump about skills and stuff it's rather boring to read. Its not very thrilling or anticipating but okayish kinda novel. If only author could reduce the info dump and focus more on story development then it would be better. I'm very tired of reading long descriptions in every chapters.
What can I say. I fell in love with this novel, detailed D&D world with a smart hard working MC. He is not too cruel or too good he is just a regular person with a goal. Some chapters are outstanding when it comes to writing quality. The minus is that it is just 1 chapter a day I want MORE!!!
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This Rating is too low for this novel. Atleast it should be closer to night ranger novel rating. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏