Reviews of A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world
A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world
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The story is good but the author writes very slowly. It should not be that difficult to write the events that will happen.At least the connected chapter should release together.
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bruh this is migraine inducing. it needs serious editing , and is loaded with meandering run on sentences. from what I gathered in 12 chapters it's a decent ish story, but seriously in its current state it's going to give someone a stroke. also mp seems excessively childish for someone who is so talented.
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I only got two episodes in, but the grammer and a few things that were said (not bad things just could have worded it better to suit the story) just put me off of the story. the concept is good but it was approached badily. the later chapters could be better but i just cant bring myself to continue reading it.
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