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So far this is one of the better ones that I've read from this genre. I'm curious to see where the author takes the story. I like the main character, and I think the author has a good plot and so far it's been entertaining and enjoyable to read. The characters are interesting and the author does well portraying their thoughts and intentions while still hunting that more development for the future. I look forward to the rest of the story.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This story is amazing in a word. Writer made a steady development of the story which is too much appreciating. Characters are cool as well as background. Despite a few grammatical problems, the narrative style was quite good. I request the write to elaborate a little as it contains magics and not a technological background that we understand too quickly. And please, writer, update as soon as possible. The story starts to be too temptating as the leads are going to meet again.[img=update][img=update]
Here to support author-sama! A story about Love, royal romance, and maybe... betrayal? I have just read the 3 chapters published and I demand more! its not enough! please update and quench my thrist--! okay. i better stop before sounding like a maniac. LFMAO anyway, good job author! a nice start and chilling oneヽ(*゚ー゚*)ノ . . . . . . . . me want more
The synopsis is written well. You expect to read a reall masterpiece, but... Boom! Not a genre I would normally read. Objectively speaking, the story line is interesting, but there is something missing. I wonder myself what is it? Some kind of lack the lightness? There are places that I feel the text is a bit artificial, even kinda plastic. So definietly there is a place to improve.
I'm not a big fan of this genre, I found myself having difficulties keeping up with this kind of story. But this story didn't. Maybe it's the light way it's written but I found myself reading the first 8 chapters in a row!! From character-building to the plot, and the good world-building and background, this story is just too good! They are some grammar mishap here and there but not much. Keep up with the good work author!!
Just reading the synopsis I started getting the GOT vives. Entering the story I was spellbound by the plotline and though I really love this genre but I don't get to read more on this in the way I want the plotline to go. Impressive job author 👍 I hope the story reaches some great heights with a lot of drama, romance and magic to it.
A beautiful cover page! From the very begining, the reader can feel that the author has a concept for the whole story! A big plus for that ;) The plot is intriguing, the main character has an interesting personality. I wonder if Rosabella will be able to overcome her prejudices as to whether love will win... Well done! The only thing... I am a conservative reader and even more conservative writer and I don't like jumping from one POV to another. That's the author's/narrator's task to present the created reality, the action, and the characters's feeling, etc.
An action packed high intensity novel that will rope you in at the first chapter! If you love strong female leads, action, incredible world building, and magic, then this is a book for you! I really only have good things to say about this novel. I haven't finished yet but I'm keeping it in my library to wait for more updates on it! Thank you Author! Keep it up!
Great book, well written story, excellent creativity and interesting plot. From the very beginning, the plot is intriguing. The reader straight away knows that you have a concept for the whole story. Characters are well described. There are close to no grammatical mistakes. Well done Author! Waiting for more chapters.
The drama and medieval feel in this is really great as well as the start of the novel. I love your writing style and the characters here are portrayed very well, I wish I could be as patient as our queen right there reminding herself to be calm 🤣 It's still new so it has only few chapters but I'm certain this will be a great novel👌 Good work, author!