A Love at Stake

I loved it and hated it .loved it because it was a good au world done perfectly from lily pov. Hated it because I am person likes perfect happy ending . Even though I know they are not possible in real life .

The writing quality is good, better than most on this website. I like the story but I feel as though it doesn't have a specific direction or end goal that it's working towards. I feel like this kind of story is better off being a One-shot, than a many chapter novella. If it had an overarching story, I think I would rate the story higher. There were moments that were quite moving, so I enjoyed that. Keep writing! Even though the ending is non-conclusive, I would be open to reading this for binging purposes. Good job. :)