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A Fool's Dream

Author: RandomGuy
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Read A Fool's Dream novel written by the author RandomGuy on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Sci-fi stories, covering action, adventure, weaktostrong, superpowers. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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Fate's full of unpredictable events, it will give you something that's life changing or it will give you nothing at all Once, I was stand at the top but now I'm not anymore The hunter had become the prey and the prey had to survive each days Stars in the night sky is something I only gaze upon from afar, but now I travels to hundreds of it My name's Zhoutian... and this is my story... _________________ Author note : hi, it's my first story to write and maybe the story would be confusing at first few chapters but everything would be slowly explained in later chapters. English is not my native or first language so there's maybe would be many grammars mistakes, but If you guys is alright with it, welcome aboard! PS : there would be some curse words in this story so I warn you in advance if you are not alright with it Another PS : the story real journey would really start at the volume 2. Volume 1 only told the MC world background my side story : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14972925506410405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4304972744

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Shezarrine
ShezarrineLv14Shezarrine

I have to admit, I'm hooked. The cultivation system is thought out, very traditional. I like the mc, its more rare to have one instantly op but it's a change of pace. Only complaint i could have is the few grammatical ones, but its nothing unreadable.

Tea_Tae
Tea_TaeLv13Tea_Tae

Those looking for some fantasy and adventure, then this is for you! The author does a good job in building the world and characters. I'd love to follow their journey more! Keep it up!

MadReader
MadReaderLv5MadReader

That synposis immediately attracted this old philosophical oldie to itself. So, for synopsis, oldie gives 5 star! Oldie could use them as quotes irl!

Ak02
Ak02Lv12Ak02

The story is fascinating!!! I already added this novel to my library and waiting for the next update. Keep up your excellent work, my friend!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

MAKKAPATI
MAKKAPATILv3MAKKAPATI

The story is very interesting story. The scenery and the characters actions is best described. However, punctuations and grammar issues needs to be proofread and be corrected.It's best to find someone to edit it. Keep it up author!

MiszYumi
MiszYumiLv5MiszYumi

I gave u 5⭐️ for the story and detailing. Im not gonna go through grammar issues and full stops. I know you are aware of it. The story itself was good enough to get 5 stars. Keep writing and I’ll support you 😉good luck!!!

Gomenasa
GomenasaLv3Gomenasa

It's a good story for the most part, of course the grammar has room for improvements but that's not a problem at all, I like the main character, but as he is already developed at the beginning it poses the problem of him seeming kind of dull.

ReinSTR
ReinSTRLv5ReinSTR

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Aysel_Inara
Aysel_InaraLv10Aysel_Inara

Quoting the title I'm really looking forward for the story to justifiably fit tp that. Talking about the plotline it's for the fantasy lovers who wants the fusion of action. The actionscript is really compelling along with the world background matched to it. The error lies with the punctuations as there aren't any stops or pauses to indicate the structural analysis of the story. Yet it's readability is fine with the good vocabulary. ❤

zetsubouaichan
zetsubouaichanLv14zetsubouaichan

I read this up to chapter 13 I did not know what to expect when I read the synopsis, but once I read the story, it was pretty impressive. The author did an excellent job with writing on the world background. The description was good and vivid. The story definitely has potential. I don't usually mind grammar and misspellings, but I hope the author can look at the punctuations. Also, some of the paragraphs were too long. It would be good if you can break them up into shorter sections. Good luck, author!

Brandongould1994
Brandongould1994Lv4Brandongould1994

This is Brandon gould I am responding to a review swap for this book so you can give a review on my book. First off I think it is a good book and I liked the chapters I read, But in my own opinion I think your MC is a Gary Stew. A Gary Stew is the male version of a Mary Sue. Now I read up to the fourth chapter. I think the world you created is very unique and interesting. Your MC can be overpowered but he needs weakness. I think he is a gary stew is because he has no flaws, Your MC is God and you have made a MC that can't die, or loss must pepole would find that type of MC boring. A Overpowered MC can be done you just got to let the bad guys beat up your MC and give him some weakness Just giving my opinion Hope to see that review

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

I enjoyed reading this one and I'll put it to my collections. Just like they said, the narration is good and you deserve 5 stars. The characters are well defined and the world building is good.

Iamstephaniebea
IamstephaniebeaLv3Iamstephaniebea

Hey guys! The story is amazing. Just a glimpse of one chapter just boom! captivated my attention and It seems like I can't stop reading until the end cos of your good work.. Nice work and keep it up. 👍

LiLhyz
LiLhyzLv13LiLhyz

Liking the story so far. The author described the realms well and was very vivid in narrating the scenes. Though I am not into fantasy novels, this got me interested. My only comment so far is the lack of the use of punctuations, particularly a period. Still, it did not affect how the story was told so it's not a big deal.

LunarFlakes
LunarFlakesLv3LunarFlakes

The world background of this novel is amazing, good job on that author! I really like how the author explains the world very clearly. Keep up the good work!

Kamlyn
KamlynLv14Kamlyn

I am looking forward to this one. I stumbled on to it while browsing comments. I am adding it to my library for now but I will read it when I get time. And I would like to add one thing, It would be better if you could add a few more details to synopsis. So that it will become easy for people to know about the story. And though I never read about adventure but it will be interesting.

Empress_Ai
Empress_AiLv3Empress_Ai

I enjoy reading this one. It had a really nice and interesting plot line. I can see some typographical error but it's okay because It did not mess up with the story. Have a nice day ahead.

Wild_Bunni93
Wild_Bunni93Lv3Wild_Bunni93

i enjoyed reading this there are a few grammar Error but noting that would stop you from reading it cleary. the fighting scene sound awesome it very detail . Good job

GD_Cruz
GD_CruzLv5GD_Cruz

This is an interesting story that is certainly worth your time. The world building is solid with mechanics and rules that help flesh out the tale. The main MC is a cool guy too. I did notice a few grammar errors but they don't really break the flow of your reading so it's no big issue. As an action-adventure tale, I give this novel the two-thumbs up and recommend it. Keep up the good work, author. :)

Sigheti
SighetiLv4Sigheti

The premise of the story is depicted clearly. The world building is accordingly, as everything is explained in great detail for the reader. Sadly, the quality of the grammar is rather poor. I believe this work has the potential to grow into more, but on the condition that the overall quality improves. I wish you a lot of fun writing the rest of your story.

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