Definitely waiting for more new chapters. However, the writing needs editing with punctuations and spellings. Dialogues are well carried out, I must say. Keep writing!! :)
Interesting story.. requires some more magic in it...good job author keep doingđ wishing to read the rest of the story to break the suspense.
i am a bit confused about this book. i will have to wait till i read a few more chapters. the writer is doing a good job but it would be better if spelling mistakes and punctuation errors are rectified.
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It's really wondering story.... which makes me to wait for the next chapter. And am waiting for it... keep writing .... the way you designed the character and script is awesome.. loving itđ
I believe you have a story to tell. And I am sure it is amazing. I just hope that we could have a better understanding when it comes to using punctuations properly. Include also the sentence structure đ. Nevertheless, the synopsis is catchy đ