Xeeraaruwa
There are only two chapters but so far the story looks good. It has a gripping start and is intriguing through the chapters. I don't read many FL novels so don't know if this is Cliché or not but the start was interesting. If you can ignore some minor grammatical mistakes, this is the story for you.
I just read the first three chapters, but I enjoyed it when I read this novel 🤗 The MC Glamour is so interesting. Her character is so special, I think. The author is so smart in describing the situations. It's so vivid and detailed. The flow of the story is enjoyable. It's quite relaxing when I read this novel. Overall, I enjoy this novel, so I give it five stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
So far, I think it's written pretty well for a cliché. There are some capitalisation errors here and there but they're pretty ignorable as it is. I think the whole concept of the game is interesting but I want more information on the FL and where she is before jumping in to the romance main plot. You would also benefit from describing her surroundings more other than purely her thoughts so readers can gauge what it's like for her through indirect description - it makes your writing style more varied. As a story, this has potential of grabbing an audience's attention. Thank you for writing this :)