Sweating_Cloud
This Mc is very Naive, never learn what happen to him before.. sixteen already mature in my country.. many children on my country have more mature tinking than this Mc.. ohhh..mayb author from rich country that only have naive teenager... This is good for killing time.. overall is still good than other novel that have Naive Mc too.
Thoroughly disappointing. I was sold on the premise but the mcs stupid decisions and pointless killings are a real turn-off. I get that hes 15 and all but an immature and dumb mc just doesnt translate do an enjoyable reading experience. That being said the premise is decent id just wish the author wouldnt have begun the novel with the unbearable chain of stupid decisions triggering more problems.
I was suprised about your quality of writing and story telling. I have tried original stories before, but those were somehow lacking. I am really enjoying the story and I can't wait to read the new chapter. Hopefully you keep updating this story. I am looking forward to see what will happen next! Keep up the good work :)
This is by far one of the greatest novels I've ever read! I'm glad that I managed to uncover this gem. I appreciate that somebody finally decided to write about an MC which truly doesn't descriminate against other race and even going as far as to fight on their side (even though the conflict is among the same race). This novel is truly a breath of fresh air. Thank you for your hard work and I hope you will get this novel done! Will be greatly anticipating new chapters:)