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Read ‘--------’ Online for Free, written by the author DFF123, This book is a Fantasy Novel, covering ACTION Fiction, ADVENTURE Light Novel, SYSTEM Internet Novel, and the synopsis is: Starting off on here and being able to reach so many readers was a dream come true. After over 11 months of hard work, I...

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Starting off on here and being able to reach so many readers was a dream come true. After over 11 months of hard work, I finally released the 3 titles I wrote on Amazon and became a self published author. If any of you want to support, you can see all three titles below. If not, I completely understand. Thank you for the wonderful year of supporting this dream of mine! -dff123 https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07XCSMTR9 https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07XWDYBMX https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07XNCNHPB

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hawlol
hawlolLv4hawlol

Nice Idea, shallow execution with short chapters. Bad dialogue, flat characters, weird reasonings and messy plot plunges this nice idea into something unreadable. The MC is also very unlikeable because of one too many dumb decisions and lack of personality. Grammar and number of updates are ok, but that's about it. My advice to the author is to cut back on the number of characters/plots and develop one plot line well, instead of rushing among several. It would be better for you to focus on developing the starter village with some monster hunts on these 30 first chapters than throw random factions of a city that's far away, several random new characters that he meets in the forest and still add some random orc attack and a sudden imprisonment that made no sense. Sometimes, less is more. There's a difference between fast paced novels and a messy plot. This one feels like getting random disconnected quests at a MMORPG.

Jagath
JagathLv13Jagath

Story is very hard to get into. Chapters are way too short and the story isnt developed well. It almost feels like the author is just telling us what happened instead of letting the reader experience it thru the story.

Lun_Kitrane
Lun_KitraneLv14Lun_Kitrane

Shows promise currently. A bit short each chapter and the characters are a bit hollow. The concept of cards being used to enhance himself in a rpg like way is interesting though and could be great if done right. The MC is a bit of a.....well entitled asshole but maybe he will change. Waiting for more chapters to improve my opinion and edit this review.

rulerofdarkness666
rulerofdarkness666Lv2rulerofdarkness666

the novel is really good but chapters are pretty short i think that around chapter 20 the length increases to normal so i guess the author definitely is reading the reviews and comments which all beg he/she to increase their lengths

Frogene
FrogeneLv14Frogene

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94austinsmith
94austinsmithLv294austinsmith

Releases seem to be consistent for now, the quality of the story is up there, and story development seems slow but has an actual pace. 5/5 for writing quality, 5/5 for stability of updates, 5/5 for story development (though on the slower side), 5/5 for character design, and 5/5 for world background. Please continue writing author!!!!

Immortal_Kaizer
Immortal_KaizerLv13Immortal_Kaizer

Bro author i fall in love with the novel.. i hope it will continue updated the chapter.. all is good except it to short.. but it still quality and interesting... So all the best i will vote this novel start from today..

Kurosis
KurosisLv4Kurosis

Nice story and system, its just chapers a too short. Im at chapter 24 feels like i read 10 chapters of other fanfics... 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140 1

Empressblue
EmpressblueLv5Empressblue

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I_HATE_NIGGERS
I_HATE_NIGGERSLv12I_HATE_NIGGERS

At this point, while reading this i got a really strong dejavu.. the mc is really similar to "that" novel. His personality, action, reaction and whatever. He is just really dumb but covered with really thick plot armor.

g9o
g9oLv4g9o

Good story and stable release but not detailed and short chapters..................................................,.............................................................................,.........................................................fhiiuffghugjkfejggkeekidjeudkekdjdidkdjxidkdkxidjjdjdkdkdjcnckdksjjfjsdkskkxjfkdkdjxjdoskdjfkeododkfjdpsoxksjskxofkdjdjdodkfjfjckdkddjjdjfjdixjckdcjcjdixkcjckckcjdjxjfjdjdjvjfjdicjdosksnrjfodlskdodofksndkxlxnfdopoeiriiyooiedjfofknfjfjcjcjfjfocidjdjfijjdjdifjfjfivjfjdjcjfjficidjcifjdjfjdjdudjfujdjdjfjjjjjjjjjjdhjdjdjxhxjjxjhhhdd...,.......,.......,........,,...................,..............

akhilmohan
akhilmohanLv4akhilmohan

Thanks for the chapter. It was so good . Felt bad for the cub. Looking forward for the next day update. Hopes it will be awesome. Still want to know how leo can upgrade the cub and will it be like a pet or will it do something nasty to leo.

DanteVeil
DanteVeilLv14DanteVeil

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Lerito
LeritoLv14Lerito

Interesting so far. Would love more chapters and in a more frequent release. Keep up the good work. One of the few books that keeps me around.

Malek_Mahmoud
Malek_MahmoudLv3Malek_Mahmoud

i like the story and how its gone but the chapters are very short moreover the MC character is very bad and fooool !

Empressblue
EmpressblueLv5Empressblue

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SouthHaven
SouthHavenLv13SouthHaven

This novel has a unique take on the rpg system world that people usually take. It so far has a great update schedule and kind author. I recommend for any who read this to give it a chance.

LordDaoThief
LordDaoThiefLv15LordDaoThief

As of chapter 45! The story is expertly written although he has a system it so far can’t be used to spam and progress quickly its more like used to guide his path. I mean of course it does provide its advantages but Leo still goes through training and stuff like anyone else would, he isn’t able to defeat those of higher level than him from we’ve seen so far. He can put up a good battle but that only goes so far. Luckily though he hasn’t faced a situation yet to where if that good little while was up and that person was serious it could cost him his life. There are levels and certain power ranks the people refer to like executive and stuff as well as stats (endurance and stuff) that play a role in the rift combinatons for a win or maybe Im others cases a loss. You will not regret read this! What are you waiting for add it to your library now!

theguruofluv4all
theguruofluv4allLv2theguruofluv4all

writing quality= 5 stars stability of updates=5 stars story dev= 5 stars character design=4 stars but overall above average world background=5 stars, but its like the author tries very hard to explain things during dialogue instead of just reading something on a map or book instead like other novels

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