Comments of chapter undefined of Death Scripture

Yoo thats so edgy right there i can cut my foreskin with this novel

I think the novel is pretty interesting just for the first chapter

What a dirtbag!!! 😑

Starting with 200 chps....WOW!!!! Great job!

hmm let just wait for more,

The English just sounds off? Or am I tripping

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Bot a good start had to skip most of the first chapter as it was putting me to sleep with too much rambling.

i hope all the novel that i like, can give free 200 chapter XD

Now this my cup of tea

** Wow! What a HORRIBLE first chapter! 2400 words of WASTED TIME! This doesn't make normal people want to read the novel, nor does it show Anything of interest. It is 1 things basically, and that is to kill your target and do not leave witnesses. Simple, 1 sentence, and on with the REAL novel now, right? ack!! wasted time! Be well!

The first chapter makes it sound like it’s a game and someone chose team death match. There better be a reason for the killings.

Yjax

thanks for the chapter

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Not interesting in the least. Can't even finish the first chapter. Too drawn out.