Qi Peijia
Please understand that high caliber sniper rifles are all supersonic, which means the bullet will actually be faster than the sound. You can't Dodge a sniper round like that based off of sound, so make it off of killing instinct or danger sense...just something else to suspend disbelief. Watch a video of a high caliber rifle hitting a target . The target will shatter all the sudden and then a few seconds later then you'll hear the crack of the rifle round.
Hila just stupid girls Her sister allready brainwash by them and she work for them ho toture her sistet what joke idiot to the bone If enemy blaick mail her say they will kill her sister and si belive she just idiot she know her sistet is important for them ofcoz thry wont kill het she just idiot to the bone act ash genius what joke 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Let's see where he takes it. These chapters are more interesting then a lot of others, but it's heading down the dry route a bit. Like a bunch of little cucks (yeah that kind). Release chapters how you want mate, and ignore the haters. Your writing was getting so good that I was expecting to drop stones today, but maybe something happened? Whether it's something bad or just not so great, don't let it discourage you! Your doing great! If this is just a hobby, I can understand the chapter size - but if your going pro, I'd rather pay for really good chapter sizes, or you can give your short chapters more weight, and make them more dense in content instead. Just dont avoid both. This comment was left because of all those **** comments a few chapters back.
So many things wrong in this chapter! 1. Sniper rifle ammo is not compatible with handgun ammo 2. Most sniper bullets are supersonic. H would have been hit before she heard the shot 3. H wouldn’t have been able to dodge even if she had heard the shot, unless her super powers allow he to act in less than a millisecond AND she could move half a foot in same time, subsonic bullets are still very fast 4. Helicopter gun mounts are _powerful_, likely would have mowed down the car long before MC and team would have even started towards vehicle Just some of the most egregious plot holes...
''Right at this moment, Lambert saw his opportunity and fired a shot! Hila's expression changed at the sound of the sniper rifle, and she immediately lunged sideways to dodge while enveloping her entire body with her gray aura.'' Bullets travel faster than sound, so this is pretty much bullsh*t. You can't dodge after you hear the gun firing, you will already be dead by the time you hear the sound...