Comments of chapter undefined of Mystical Journey

... she’s your sister though ya nasty D:

Onii-chaaan~

Why is there suddenly some martial force along with the slap? It just gets more confusing each chapter.

Author said mc found this world have no magic, cultivation and so on from xianxia story... Now we have martial force and secret arts and so on. What? Author you drunk? Are you mentally challenged?

They went from "both have the same features passed down from their mom and dad" to "not related." Translator, please clarify.

That was weird right?

???? how does he suddenly realize if she has intermediate level martial arts let alone a Secret Art? Wtf he's supposedly just a regular guy, in a world he believed was normal. yet not he suddenly has knowledge bout random ****

Do something about the damn paragraphing, it's bloody difficult to read on mobile if all the words are all cramped up.

This story is just plain bad writing, author didn't utilize a single brain cell while writing it.

forced fight? check. Cringe? check.

What the **** This felt completely unnecessary

Wait, he's in his thirties, thinks like it, but for some inexplicable reason acts like a 1950's teenager when meeting his own sister?

Please, no sick disgusting in.cest crap!!!!! This is so DISGUSTING! This author is a disgusting sister Pervert! Cops should investigate authors kids to see if he Pervs on them too.

Thanks, still haven't find the point (the purpose/objective) of this story (of MC) just yet after 9 chaps..

"Lombarth said and looked at the girl beside him again" Who? What girl?

Can I vomit now? Anyway, half sister weird stuff aside. This guy still has no plan. Who cares if his dojo has “secret arts”, will they stop a bullet? Author needs to get real here - is this a cultivator world, in which case there should be evidence of “Superman” style hero types. If it is not a cultivator world - it doesn’t matter how much you train in technique you will still be “mortal” and could save a lot of time buy learning how to use a gun for a hour a week and doing whatever you want th either 167 hours. So join a rifle club and learn how humans became the apex predator. It wasn’t by copying monkeys, snakes, and birds, it was by learning how to project metal objects in a predictable trajectory at extreme velocity. Screw your dojo.

Tsundere...

the author must have changed the whole plot from a sister to a step sister only to satisfy his beastly desires and make it legal.

Garen STOOD up and said “Come On” but Ying Er Was still on the floor LYING on his chest. Wait. What?! 🤯 How the f***ck can that happen? Why did it say that Ying Er was still on the floor lying on his chest when Garen had long Stood Up!!