Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
"...a dozen feet from Han Sen. With its high speed, it quickly used its spear to stab Han Sen in the chest." Shouldn't it be: "it quickly used it's spear to stab towards his chest."??
there's errors all over this thing let alone that
First it was Sam. Then all those Stevens. Now Helen comes out of nowhere to join the gang. Who are these people?
Maybe it is 2 sacred blood creatures
Sorry, there is no way I can take some dude riding an unicorn seriously.
Who the F is Helen
Just thinking.... he's staying in that armor for days on end. It must be disgusting in there... and what about going to the bathroom?!!
Death knight?
Helen?
Unicorn
Unicorn mount will be pretty powerful I bet
good whole story should be rewritten by someone who knows better english
Thanks
Lots of name errors lately
Maybe its a pet. Haha
The hell lol omf
You must kill it
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
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Woow
Ok
Is it auto correct? The names keep changing.