Comments of chapter undefined of Thriller Paradise

The author self-insertions are annoying.

Well this is just my opinion so don't get angry guys but the author insertions are much better to me rather than a girl saying "Feng Bujue is so cool!" Yeah Fuck that.. If you don' t believe me read IRFN you'll understand..

Goddammit author! Chuckles*

uwu. Everyone hates self insertions but it feels kindof comfortable for me... Like that one friend that CANNOT (for the love of god) shut up during a movie.

Author what are you doing, go away... youre disturbing my reading!!!

Lol i found this type of narration is quite funny & amusing, though it would be annoying if every next chapters would be like this... Hope its only in a few chapters only to keep it fresh

i don't like author insertions like an excuse and some skits. Its ruining the story. Im sorry translator, but I quit in reading this novel.

Author insertions took up too much of the chapter like he was afraid of being short on word count and said "Hey I can insert my thoughts like it's part of the story and bloat it to meet the required count". To make things worse he doesn't have anything to annotate it's his words and thoughts so it gets blended together into a mesh of crap sometimes.

People wouldn’t normally stop playing after the toutorial especially if the tutorial was just running across a corridor and swinging a sword once

Does the 4th-wall breaking serve any purpose other than it's momentary jarring value? If not, that's a very bad idea

i love this already

They're pretty straight sooo... They arent totally straight!

Dude I hate how the author keeps putting himself into the book. When you read something you like to forget the fact that it's a book. I don't need the author messing up my immersion into the book. Already disliking this solely for that reason.

Why couldn't the author do that at the end. He made the chapter confusing and annoying to read by doing that

The long ratting explanation just kept me laughing

First

The author insertion made reading this chapter cumbersome. Like i dint know if i was reading a chapter or an authors note

oh boi.... loved those sentences by the author haha 💜

The author try to act like a god in the story. Hope I got a scary dream tonight, been long since the last one.