Gu Zhen Ren
Fang Yuan did not trust Bai Ning Bing, afraid she would collude with Zhang Zhu, thus he went to kill Zhang Zhu personally. As a result, Bai Ning Bing followed Shang Xin Ci in secret to protect her life. ...Are you sure it's supposed to be bai ning bing at the start? Why would she collude with that guy? I see absolutely no reason for that. It seems more likely that he killed him because he was in the way and this would make it easier to worm their way into shang xin ci's heart. We all know that ning bing is unwilling to be controlled, but she's not retarded and wouldn't do something like that. As if a rank 3 punk would be able to help her in any way. I actually want the mc to tame her properly, or "subdue" her. So that she'll not think of killing him anymore or revolting.
I can accept some OP divine investigator, I can barely accept his brother being taken to find him later, BUT I REFUSE TO BELIEVE HE DINT SEE SOME PUSSY GU MASTER WHO WAS SCREAMING FOR HELP I MIGHT ADD SINK INTO THE GROUND BEFORE HE KILLS SOMEONE. If there is one thing I hate more than anything in novels, its forced plot. This author seems to force every plot the MC encounters.