Angry Squirrel
The beginning of this chapter made me think of the similarities between the Mist Country and Poland. No, Poland shouldn't have undead knights proudly riding mystical horses, but it too is a northern land of snow and ice and it too had to constantly fight with its neighbouring countries, Germany and Russia most of all. Back to the chapter, "final" has been used a lot of times, such as "I, Holy Knight Roland, the final king of Mist Country..." "...the final knights of the battle of Diffindor" "Timier, the final remaining Dragon Knight..." Wouldn't it have been more powerful if it had been "last" instead of "final"? Also, I'm really wondering how the fantasy version of the Lutheran Church will turn out. That said, thanx for the awesome chapter! : )