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The Great Thief
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A big flaw. Novel says that he could only watch as his only loved one slowly dies. A few sentences after that, the novel state that everything changed for him when he found out he got reborned after he cried himself unconscious ON the day he found out about his sister's illness. What is this? How could he have watched his sister slowly die when he only found out about the disease and reborned right on the day of discovery?
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