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Comments of chapter undefined of Immortal Mortal

Edge
EdgeLv5Edge

The author did a lousy job at the part when Yan'er got taken away by the woman. It was totally anticlimactic, and killed off my mood. Even though the mc was described as pained but all I can feel is "She is taken. Okay. I'm angry. So angry. Bruh."

DaddyKhan
DaddyKhanLv13DaddyKhan

U wanted it to be a typical chinese novels like others ?

DrunkenAzz:At least he could say he tried by yelling, instead he does nothing and goes to work lol
This_King_
This_King_Lv3This_King_

Isn't that woman afraid that Yan'er wouldn't cultivate or harm herself, or maybe actually cultivate but then leave or kill her and go back to More Wuji?

Daoist_3_pies
Daoist_3_piesLv10Daoist_3_pies

And.... dropped. I can't stand people being taken against there will to a sect. ITS SO GOD DAMN STUPID AND IT TRIGGERS ME ECERY DAMN TIME I SEE IT. Why take a ticking time bomb with you. What's stopping here from killing you for taking her away when she's strong. It's so damn dumb it hurts.

DevaVeeran
DevaVeeranLv6DevaVeeran

Progressing too fast

Davix9520
Davix9520Lv10Davix9520

Only 9 Chapters to separate MC and the main heroine.. the future is dark.. Sure this is easier to write a plot focused on MC only, but still..

Odorico
OdoricoLv6Odorico

Wtf is that shit²

Scarlet_Rain
Scarlet_RainLv12Scarlet_Rain

Forcefully taking someone from the MC... I think she will regret this.

Ellimist
EllimistLv5Ellimist

It's his own fault. Instead of working on the channel opening solution immediately he wanted to waste time on unnecessary things. I'm already not interested in this story with such a forced plot so early.

OmnipotentApeGod
OmnipotentApeGodLv11OmnipotentApeGod

This is a joke. He only knew her for one day. I know he got the previous owners memories but that doesn't mean that he got the previous owners feelings. not only that the previous owner was obsessed with being King and was proven to not give two s**** about her. And now he's sad that she was taken away. Bul****. I f****** hate that type of s*** why can't they just make the main character by himself progress feelings or respect for another person. In my opinion that's just f****** lazy.

Immortal_Enigma
Immortal_EnigmaLv11Immortal_Enigma

This is always my favorite part in Wuxia novels, when they are weak and powerless and start to slowly grind there way up before they reach the highest level only for stronger antagonists to show up and it just repeats itself with higher and higher power levels. The first time is always the best.

LittleShrimp
LittleShrimpLv4LittleShrimp

Im guessing this ill give the protagonist a purpose. 😂😂😂 What a bad way of doing things.

bsjshs
bsjshsLv5bsjshs

How typical..

getrektfgt
getrektfgtLv6getrektfgt

Wtf is that shit😡

RukitoRin
RukitoRinLv11RukitoRin

Yan er 😭😭😭😭

bern123
bern123Lv4bern123

-ᄒᴥᄒ-

marie123chan
marie123chanLv4marie123chan

thanks

wucoo
wucooLv7wucoo

Hope the kidnapping part isn't resolved in a cliche method

Detaboo
DetabooLv4Detaboo

Too rushed. .

Weimi
WeimiLv11Weimi

The html quots are getting kinda annoying... pls change " to "

Freddie_Martinez
Freddie_MartinezLv14Freddie_Martinez

yeah