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John_AGBOR
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promising. continue reading

Scarlet_Rain
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The fact that the author decided to publish this AND that it got picked up by translators probably means the story will have plenty of development and surprises. A bit shortsighted to already doubt if its going to be any good at chapter 3.

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Positive_Lullaby
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Why not translate "Chi" as Qi like every other translator does? Why are you doing this.... bad start already.

DeathLingers
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Doubt this will be any good since hes in a world with little spirit energy its stupid one can go to a cultivators world but one cannot go from that place to a place with little spirit because like the mc they will be lost

yttrboy
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He doesn’t care if he fails, and he got kicked out of the Ye family, how is he paying his tuition??

Djabilong
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I think that ghost repellant is kinda useless on Earth... He should've sold the explosive talismans to the mob instead. Which is dangerous, yeah, but it would be really popular and expensive - it's not like the police would ever identify them as a weapon.

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Agus_Robingun
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"Ahhhh! It's coming out again!" Bai Lihau cried out loud as another wave of Yin Qi squirted from her cave. "It hasn't even been five minutes and you've already climaxed 7 times. Aren't you a little too sensitive?" Su Yang chuckled afterward. "Haaa… haaaa… haaa… How long are you going to tease my body, Su Yang?" Bai Lihua looked at him with teary eyes after experiencing too much pleasure. "Are you already exhausted? The real fun hasn't even begun yet," Su Yang then removed his clothes and tossed them into the air behind him. Bai Lihua immediately turned silent after seeing Su Yang's dragon, and she continued to stare at it with a dazed look on her face until Su Yang approached her. However, Su Yang's dragon was so stiff at this moment that it wouldn't budge a millimeter even while he moved, which dumbfounded Bai Lihua even more. 'If he sticks that inside me, I'll definitely become a different person afterward!' Bai Lihua cried inwardly. "W-Wait a second, Su Yang…" Bai Lihua suddenly said to him in a nervous voice. However, Su Yang did not stop and suddenly grabbed her by the legs before pulling her body into him. "Do you want to stop here?" Su Yang asked her after he pressed his whole sausage in-between her slit. "You don't want this?" Bai Lihua swallowed nervously at the sight of the overbearing object that was pointing at her from between her legs, feeling as though it was charming her. "I… I want it…" Bai Lihua mumbled in a dazed voice, and she no longer thought about anything else and only could only focus on the powerful beast that had managed to entice her. "Are you sure you want it?" Su Yang asked her again. "Yes! I want it, Su Yang! Please give it to me!" Bai Lihau exclaimed. "Very well!" Su Yang immediately moved his hips back before thrusting it forward, piercing Bai Lihua's maiden cave with his sword, spreading her closed walls wide open. "Ahhhh!" Bai Lihua nearly choked on her own saliva after feeling the intense pain that came from between her legs, feeling as though something had ripped inside her body. "Are you okay?" Su Yang asked her afterward, as he could see her virgin blood staining the wet bed. "I am… okay…" Bai Lihua managed to squeeze out these three words despite the pain in her body. "It'll go away soon." Su Yang began moving his body a moment later, thrusting his beast inside Bai Lihua's bloody cave. Meanwhile, Bai Lihua clenched her jaw to endure the pain. However, she gradually loosened her jaw as the pleasure began overshadowing the pain, and after a few minutes of cultivation, Bai Lihua could only feel pleasure coming from her lower body that rippled throughout the rest of her body. Pap! Pap! Pap! Su Yang pounded Bai Lihua's wet cave with his dragon reaching the deepest parts for many minutes without rest, and Bai Lihua's little sister continuously flowed with Yin Qi the entire time, climaxing again and again with barely any breaks in-between each of them. "I can't… I can't handle this anymore, Su Yang! My body and mind are going to break at this rate!" Bai Lihua exclaimed sometime later. "I know when someone is near their limit, and although you may feel like that, you are actually nowhere near your limit, and I am going to prove that to you!" After his sentence ended, Su Yang suddenly began moving his hips even faster than before. "Aaaaaah~!" Bai Lihua moaned sharply, yet she did not tell Su Yang to stop, and to her surprise, after they cultivated for a few more minutes, her condition suddenly improved, allowing her to endure the cultivation for longer.

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Agus_Robingun
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After hearing Bai Lihua's confession, Su Yang nodded with a handsome smile on his face, and he said, "Very well, Lihua. I shall make you my woman today." He then kissed her on the lips again whilst loosening her robes at the same time. "Mmm…" Bai Lihua could feel Su Yang's warm hands roaming inside her clothes and feeling the smooth skin on her body, yet she did not say anything and continued kissing him, allowing Su Yang to touch her as he pleased. A few minutes later, Bai Lihua laid on the bed naked, revealing to Su Yang her large, luscious breasts and pretty little sister. "You have a very beautiful body, and I can feel my heart beating faster after a single glance," Su Yang said with a handsome smile on his face as he teased the two pink and perky tips on Bai Lihua's peaks with his fingers. A few moments later, Su Yang kissed her soft breasts and began sucking on them while his hands reached for the wet lips between her legs. "Ahhh~!" Bai Lihua unconsciously closed her legs when she felt Su Yang's fingers brush against the edge of her slit. "Relax." Su Yang said to her. Bai Lihua nodded with a flushed face before she slowly opened her legs back up, allowing him full access to her untainted pink garden that has never been touched or seen by another man until today. Su Yang immediately began touching her pink slit the moment it showed itself, rubbing his fingers in-between the split "Mmmmh!" Bai Lihua's body trembled when an indescribable sensation slithered all over her body, and her body immediately gushed with Yin Qi in an uncontrollable manner. "Wow, I didn't expect you to be that sensitive…" A mysterious smile appeared on Su Yang's face after seeing that Bai Lihua had climaxed so quickly. "W-Wait a second Su Yang, my body is…" However, Su Yang continued to rub her slippery bottom lips, causing it to gush with even more Yin Qi. "Aaaaah~!" A lustful expression appeared on Bai Lihua's face, looking like she was on the verge of going crazy. "Look at how wet you are— you're actually a pretty lustful woman, aren't you, Lihua?" Su Yang gently pinched the pink pearl in her slit, overwhelming her body with pleasure.

Agus_Robingun
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"Su Yang, I want you to be straightforward and serious with me for once. How do you feel about me, really? Can you answer my feelings seriously? Did you mean what you said to me previously? I won't let you avoid me any longer!" "I know I said anything, but to think you would ask me for so many things… what am I going to do with you, really?" Su Yang shook his head with a smile on his face. "Su Yang! Answer me seriously!" Bai Lihua said with a serious frown on her face. "..." The smile on Su Yang's face suddenly disappeared, and after a moment of silence, he began approaching her with a serious expression on his face. "Eh? What are you doing to me, Su Yang?!" Bai Lihua cried out loud after Su Yang unexpectedly picked her up before carrying her to another room— her bedroom. "S-Su Yang?!" Bai Lihua tried again. However, Su Yang suddenly tossed her body on the bed before going onto the bed himself and pinning her down by being right on top of her. "Su Yang…" Bai Lihua laid on the bed and stared at Su Yang's handsome face that was only inches away from her own blushing face. "I want you, Bai Lihua. And I meant what I said previously. I want you to be my woman— officially," Su Yang spoke while staring at Bai Lihua right in her beautiful and clear eyes. "What about you? Did you mean it when you said you love me? Do you really want to be my woman?" Hearing Su Yang's words and his question, Bai Lihua turned silent for a moment with a dazed look on her face. A few seconds later, Bai Lihua suddenly moved her arms and touched Su Yang's face with her hands before pulling his head into her. Once their lips were connected, Bai Lihua began kissing Su Yang passionately, even using her tongue this time. A few minutes of intense kissing later, Bai Lihua said to him with a loving gaze, "I really love you, Su Yang, and I want to be your woman."

Agus_Robingun
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Chapter 749: Tossing Her on the Bed Sometime later, once Su Yang emptied all of the storage rings and created many mountains from 150 million spirit stones, he returned to the scrolls on the floor and sat before them again. After closing his eyes and concentrating a bit, Su Yang slapped the scrolls, causing a purple pillar of light to shoot out of the scrolls and towards the heavens. However, before they could reach the clouds, the purple pillars were blocked by the formation around the Heavenly Swan Sect before being absorbed by it. Once the purple pillar of light was completely absorbed, the spirit stones on the ground gushed with spiritual energy before being absorbed by the formation too. A few minutes later, all 150 million spirit stones dissipated into the air. Su Yang stood up and patted his buttocks afterward. He then looked at the dazed disciples and sect elders and spoke with a smile on his face, "I have just strengthened the defensive formation protecting the Heavenly Swan Sect. Even Sovereign Spirit Realm Cultivators will not be able to invade into this place now." "There's no need to thank me since I am merely doing this for your Sect Master." After a moment of silence, Su Yang continued, "By the way, for those of you who will be assisting me in the near future, I'd like to take this time to thank you now. Thank you, and I promise you that you won't regret it." When the disciples and sect elders saw the handsome smile on Su Yang's face, they felt as though a sword had suddenly pierced their heart, clearly smitten by him. "I will definitely be there for you, Su Yang!" One of the disciples suddenly shouted out loud. "Me too! I will also be there! You can do anything to my body then!" Once one of the disciples there opened her mouth, the others also began shouting their desire to participate until nearly every disciple there has expressed their excitement. "Good. I will be looking forward to cultivating with all of you. Until then." After saying that, Su Yang flew away and returned to Bai Lihua's living quarters. "So that was Su Yang, huh? He's much more dreamy than I'd imagined!" The disciples continued to talk about Su Yang even many minutes after he left the scene. Sometime later, Su Yang returned to Bai Lihua's house and went to the pill room, where she was in the middle of concocting a pill with the new technique Su Yang had given her. 'It's only been a few hours since I gave her the technique and she's already comprehended it to the point where she can apply it to her alchemy. Bai Lihua… you're quite the fast learner,' Su Yang silently praised Bai Lihua inside his head, and he proceeded to sit down on the ground and waited for her to finish concocting the pill. Two hours later, Bai Lihua retrieved her alchemy flames and opened the pill cauldron, taking out an Elementary-grade pill that was nearly pure white, signifying its high quality. "What do you think, Su Yang? I tried using the technique you gave me and it improved my ability to control my alchemy flames significantly!" Bai Lihua said to him with excitement on her beautiful face. Su Yang nodded and said, "Impressive to say the least." "Really?" The joy on Bai Lihua's face became more apparent after hearing his words. "Yes. You've exceeded my expectations once again. Therefore, I'll give you another reward. But I cannot think of anything, so why don't you tell me what you want from me? Anything you want," Su Yang suddenly said to her with a mysterious smile on his face. "Anything I want from you…? Can it really be anything?" Bai Lihua swallowed nervously before asking him with a surprised look on her face. "Yes. If it's within my power," Su Yang nodded his head. "..." After a moment of silence, Bai Lihua spoke with a resolute expression on her face, "Su Yang, I want you to be straightforward and serious with me for once. How do you feel about me, reall

Mike_Morehead
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Light_God
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The start is bad but i hope it gets better

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