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Comments of chapter undefined of Once Upon A Time, There Was A Spirit Sword Mountain

Valamdur
ValamdurLv13Valamdur

Wow, I've read the first chapter of this novel many years before... and today is the last time i'll hear of Wang Lu... i feel both happy and empty, but the immortal pass is endless and i shall continue my journey ^^

Jieren
JierenLv5Jieren

This story has ended up here. One more thing I would like to mention is that the person who wrote the diary, as many readers in China inferred after this novel ended in 2015, could be Yu Mengjun in Chapter 450, because the writer was not from Spirit Sword sect, and she called Qiong Hua senior sister. So she most likely comes from ShengJing sect. She prayed in front of Wang Lu’s status and got some good response, so she should have a good personal relationship with Wang Lu. If the diary writer were not a new character, considering a cultivator in ShengJing Sect who has a good relationship with Wang Lu, the writer was most likely Yu Mengjun who showed up in Chapter 450. This is a good novel overall in my opinion, in fact I have re-read this novel more than 20 time at least, and got new understandings or memes in this novel each time I read it. This English version one might lose part of the beauty of this novel, some of the meaning has been simplified to an easy understanding phrase while the original expression contains much more references, but it happens to all translation work. Usually there are not always equivalent expressions in 2 different language system, as well as that there could be some references or memes involved, I, as an native speaker who have read this book for lots of time, still can not get all the hidden references in this novel, so that the translators are always recreating things by his own understanding to make the meaning as closed as possible. I think Subudai has done a very hard and great work in this translation. I have tried help during the time, and he shared me the vocabulary list file which is pages long full filled with words like Character names, different spells, levels, items... I can see they are all well-organized and it requires a lot of hard work, but it is the hard work that ensures the consistency of this novel translation. About the novel itself, this is an ironic novel overall in my opinion even though it contains many humorous jokers in a cultivating subject. Usually the cultivating ending should be a bright future goal, the upper world contains peace, joy and love. In some other novel, the story could just end up when hardworking MC keeps level up until the end. The Immortal King in this novel, however, which should be the final goal to all cultivators, is a bad guy. All cultivators are trying hard for their whole lives to go up and become more and more powerful. When some great talents of them like Desheng really went the immortal world, it would soon be eaten by XIa yu. Wang Wu’s outer path is a great try which was not understood by most cultivator most of the time. Wang Lu used Gundam designed by Sun Buping to fight rather than cultivating skills. The setting is kind like to encourage people not just hardworking blindly, sometimes you need to take some time to think about where you are planning to go and whether you are on the correct way. The lies that Wang Lu made up in chapter 100 are actually much more beautiful than the reality. Wang Lu said we need a million immortals as the forerunners. Everyone hardworking, when we get one million people finally becoming immortal, our world have a brighter future. I feel a bit of depressed when I read the final sentence of this novel for the first time. I was not sure what did I expect. Did I want more stories of new characters in the new world or just let Wang Lu and Wang Wu’s stories continue? But in the new world, the old cultivators who we are familiar with have been the top level powerful cultivators in this world, how the story starts here? So probably the story has to end up here. As the story goes, Wang Lu becomes more and more merciless and political involved. That’s understandable that people are all growing.

DDDTTT
DDDTTTLv4DDDTTT

whew I was scared for a bit as the diary was kinda of a downer. sad how wang lu withered away, but still had a happy ending

Qister
QisterLv13Qister

Wang Wu was harvesting public grain off Wang Lu while he was comatose?

xenoheart
xenoheartLv5xenoheart

Thank you AL_Squad for translation this series!!! Glad it is at least a happy ending, but I think in the end there are still unanswered questions like: - the story behind time travel inside the immortal tomb - who was the demon earth immortal who free Wang Lu from his demon oath? - who was the jindan servant of Qiong Hua whom Wang Lu said has some kind of fate with him?

shadd123
shadd123Lv13shadd123

G O O D B Y E

ManCat
ManCatLv4ManCat

Farewell my fellow daoist sisters and brothers,our journey to achieve an immortality isn't ended yet.May opportunities bring us together on another wonderfull journey. Thank you Al_Squad for your hardwork all this time.

Istubar
IstubarLv6Istubar

Thanks for the chapter (First in the last chapter)

Istubar
IstubarLv6Istubar

what a last chapter, I just read it again and I feel that I want some end words, well the manwha is still ongoing, so maybe we will have more things in the manwha. was a really great storied and the reason I made this account on here, already years ago, what a long journey, It's feel like a change, and a loss, I enter to vote here everyday since years, so, it's feel nostalgic.

kralizec
kralizecLv6kralizec

What a trip! This was the first cultivation novel I started reading, so at first I missed a lot of the references (cultivation stages, etc.), but as I read more novels, I found this one even funnier. Thanks to everybody who made this possible: author, translator, editors, etc.!

Xinhuan
XinhuanLv15Xinhuan

Good bye my friends, may we meet again in the next cultivation world...

Cat_King
Cat_KingLv5Cat_King

.... thank you for completing this novel. Been a long time coming but it’s good to see the conclusion.

Acalycal
AcalycalLv13Acalycal

I definitely enjoyed the early parts of this novel the most but the rest was quite good as well and I had a good time. So thanks for the translation, it was a good read.

Spear_ash
Spear_ashLv4Spear_ash

Thank you for translating this great novel

Naminam
NaminamLv1Naminam

i will miss Wang Lu Lu

TuckingFypo
TuckingFypoLv5TuckingFypo

Nani the F*CK?!

Baek_Dang
Baek_DangLv1Baek_Dang

So, Wang Lu junior died before it's born?

HoneydewSovereign
HoneydewSovereignLv5HoneydewSovereign

This feels like the end of The King's Avatar all over again. Phew. What a great story. Thank you for the years of hard work.

Pizz
PizzLv11Pizz

hmm what happened to the missing 34 chapters as listed on https://***.novelupdates.com/series/once-upon-a-time-there-was-a-spirit-sword-mountain/ or is NU database screwed up as it never normal is other than tagging bs

ilegria
ilegriaLv6ilegria

I'm glad to see the end after all this years.