Silver72
Shameless author here... So, I've worked really hard to put this story together and it's taken me a long while so I hope anyone reading this enjoys it. I'm pretty confident in my english, so it should be easy to understand what I'm writing. I do tend to make things move slowly, it's just my writing style, but I'm sure that if you bear with it you'll be happy when we reach the important parts of the story. I don't want to give you any of my opinions about the story here because that's up to you to decide... I'd appreciate any feedback you can give me. Thanks so much for reading this I hope you give my work a chance, it will really mean the world to me... and take care of yourselves -S
good story, for specific tastes, but that of the multiple personality is a big no, my brain does not want to process that they are the same people, it is a constant anguish, it is like having multiple protagonists, and a lot of names to memorize, it is like that naruto does the clone jutsu, and each one has its appearance, name and personality.
Excellently written!!! Usually,I am not a fan of system novels, but this book has sparked my curiosity and I ended up reading. It was totally worth it!!! The plot itself appears promising and the characters are well written. Most of the system novels does not show much detailings about background setup or the world- but this story just blew my mind with the portrayal of the world and the main characters. Author have an excellent command over the language and I wonder why it shows low views for this gem? Kudos to the author, keep up the good work πππ
This book took me quite long to finish until the recent 51 chapters. The writing quality is amazing, and each part of the dialog was very refined. I am surprised that Silver could create something this amazing, which got me hooked further. The story is deep, without a hint of waste of fillers in between. Worthy of being another piece of a masterpiece that worth your time. Give it a try, and you'll know why I said so.
I have a mixed feeling while reading this book. Maybe because it is not my style of reading... so it concerns me and not the author's work. That doesn't stop me from finding the plot and the characters well crafted, and that the author was involved in the descriptions and the details making a quality work. To be added to your reading list !
A well written story with well written characters. I was really hooked from the beginning. Talan had my heart immediately and so did samsara as a wee lil baby and then it made sense for him to be reborn. It reminded me of a fic I read years back that was the many faces of....someone Can't remember the name .I just know that many versions of the same person made different choices and stuff. Also, dad stealing purity was just...π³