The_SaadKhan
I thought this felt familiar. Salad Saiyan did this story on YouTube and 90% of your cues are directly taken from his version. You just added speech to it and even then, the speech you add doesn't really do much. It feels like a speech version of Salads story. Are this story and come up with one that feels like you wrote it yourself and not just ripped it off from someone else and didn't credit them.