Yugam_Mandal
hm, the story line is quite good but, writer, can you make the plot go slower because in my opinion you are too hasty when making it because if you rush too much then the story won't be enjoyable to read, a little suggestion: pss no suggestions the story is good and enough keep developing new ideas and make your novel more exciting and don't drop this story, which I have said to many writers such as the author of several DXD stories which are quite good, the author of Mushoku Tensei and several other good writers who for some reason dropped their works which were quite good. I hope you're not a writer who drops his work,