RHpositive
Yeahh it's acquired taste I suppose not many are interested in this style of writing it's too complex it's reminds me of English classes but it's just my problem I don't know if others like it or not and I can't say that you have made many mistakes you are pretty good at it to but don't drag it too much when it can be described or explained in shot terms
RHpositive:working on it, but to tell the truth, its the way i speak and write :( I'm gradually simplifying them, and after finishing with chapters 7 to 14, i will continue to add all the new chapters that have been completed so far. I am a bit of a man of old writing, but it seem people don't like it that way.