Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Mihawk Template
Naruto: Mihawk Template
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bro I like the mc, I like his power, but why do you have to put him in the same generation as naruto? now his actions really don't feel right, what kind of student can escape and escape from the supervision of the village and go to the final camp without being caught, this it just feels like you're forcing the plot of this story for mc. I think if you want to develop mc's power this quickly you should just put it in the itachi or kakashi generation, that would make more sense for the progress of his power and the development of his character, i mean it's a bit strange to see academy students fighting S rank naughty ninja then argue about his ideology, it would make more sense if he was of the same generation as Itachi or Kakashi, that would make more sense. But well after all I like my story, your MC, I just regret the MC's character development which seems rushed and forced for the sake of plot importance.
