Comments of chapter undefined of My dumb life in Shadow Slave

I just want to say the attribute. That acts like shadow dance should be at least only comparable to the first and second steps after that. It should be worse than shadow dance and. It should not be able to copy shadow dance. In any form or way should not be better than it. Also, please don't make it more powerful Oh yeah, until the third and fourth step, it's better or comparable to the first and second steps of shadow dance, but the other steps are massively better than it. So yeah, just going to hope you don't make him more powerful than the sunny because sunny is technically OP compared to a lot of other characters in his own universe. Otherwise good writing

Thx for the chap 🍪

Hey adamım burda yeni bir fanfice başlıyorsun ve haber vermiyorsun kalbim kırıldı.(Not:Cote dan geliyorum)

I apologise if I was I rude Also, thank you for the chapter.

thanks for the chapter

So seriously Titan, no seriously Titan.That that is just thing like bull carp the mc of shadow slave barely handle a tyrant and only saved by luck A Titan is way too much if you re saying you don't want to make an o. P character then don't make him OP or given these many powers. The attributes are completely busted and how powerful and Basically has 2 aspect abilities. his Flaw is weak as hell. It's nothing relating to his character from what I read and not actually a good flaw. Fear and anger is not a good though I understand that but looking at his aspect, his 2 aspects in his overpowered attributes.. Like seriously, he still is completely busted. You better give us a good example in the future. How is not op?

Also remove week to strong from the tags he is already starting off strong as hell

I have an idea.You don't make the character as strong as any main characters like sunny kai and changing star Because compared to every other character, they're busted as well. But it feels like they earned it. And Yorkshire has not so just make him in any way of form weaker than those characters. It will feel like he's not that overpowered if he's not as strong as the main cast of characters of the original story This is based off of Sure you can still make him powerful. But You can make him a bottom tier of the strongest still in the group of the strongest sleepers awakened and saints, but he is the weakest in those groups. Like you mentioned he can you know not beat characters like caster? Because he is in the bottom tier of the strongest while caster is in the top five of the strongest or six or seven The sleepers That would make it more fair in my own opinion Of course, this is my own opinion. You are the writer here and it is your decisions. How to go with this fanfic? But we readers don't want.an OP character. so please consider what I'm saying. If you don't want a character to be weak Then you can make him a bottom tear in the strongest. It is as simple as that. Also, please nerf him