Comments of chapter undefined of GATEWAY TO FREEDOM

I can see the work out into this chapter, but the author should not make certain errors, like the obvious switch in narration style. also, it gave a good image of the fight, but it didn't give me enough reason to care about the MC, even if her type of people were getting arrested, there should be a story that will make me care for her and be in her side, right now o am on nobody's side, because all o knows os that they were being hunted, but why are they getting hunted, why should I care about the getting hunted?