Gilgamesh_Official
I really liked it! It’s so nice to see a fanfic where the timeline is during before the doom since those types of fanfics are dropped, abandoned or very very few.
So thank you author! I also really like the chemistry between the protagonist and Jaenera! It seems natural. I really hope that the protagonist and Jaenera manages to bring lots of their already living dragons and tons of high quality dragon eggs with them to the future. I’d love for them to conquer Essos and Naath; Both lands with hidden potential while one of them is far more massive, compared to the likes of Westeros. I would never accept the protagonist and his sister-wife to settle for being just a lord and lady because compared to the Targaryens who used to be lower in status, the Targaryens are now royalty. That must irritate their egos as a far more superior dragonlord family. Please update with more chapters! Really eager to read more of this wonderful fanfic!😊🙏❤️❤️❤️
Honestly, I'm quite interested in the story, I'm curious about the development and this first chapter managed to keep me hooked, but I have some points I'd like to highlight.. the lines with the sister and mother were a little strange, with those first words repeating “My~ my son” for example, I understood the idea behind that but it's still a little strange, are they stuttering? and also the way the dialogue with the sister was done I found it a little strange from the beginning of the story, if we have a relationship occurring between them it would be better to first demonstrate that this exists and then show something more intimate, at least that's my opinion In my opinion, I think it’s a bit “aggressive” to show something more intimate on the first impression