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Comments of chapter undefined of Bartender's Omniversal Conquest

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AnonFrost
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Imma be honest, It's too forced.. like, the dialogue and their reaction. why Would Lala suddenly talk about her family matter to someone she never&didn't even know before? It's as if, "oh wow! a bartender! surely nothing bad would happen if i blaber my private matter about my entire family and my races!" like that. even in the Cannon, altough she has lot of loose screw (innocent and almost idiot in my opinion) but she still wary with other.

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MacKenzie_50943
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i think yer doing great 👍

LittleWind:Nah, it's fine. Thanks for the opinion anyway. I guess I'm not that good with conversation sometimes because I forget about the personalities of the characters I've written. Hehehe.

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AgronGamerTV
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idc someone says forced or anything I like the instruction w lala it's quite cute and you better not nerf that power later on or

Koloja
KolojaLv2Koloja

Regeneration should be included in the physical. Good job starting a possible war between 2 races

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VictorElderblood
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great chapter

Maradilue
MaradilueLv13Maradilue

👍

Asura69s
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op potential novel and as everyone know lala is naive type so it's good

SirJuan_Juan
SirJuan_JuanLv14SirJuan_Juan

Good Chapter 👍