Comments of chapter undefined of Stiles A fanfic for fun

Okay I’m honestly at a loss so far, this is interesting and has potential but there’s some stuff that’s confusing. First off the first chapter stiles said he awoke future knowledge of what’s coming and then he started working out and ever since the hes acted oblivious to the supernatural stuff like it never happened. Then there’s the fact he wasn’t bitten by an alpha or anything and just randomly woke up with abs and there was no explanation to that. Then finally there’s the issue where you have stiles and Allison getting together way to fast that it seems forced, they met before school began and then by the time school was over that same day they started dating and throwing themselves at each other, it just seems forced and a waste to do that and ruin it. All In all this is interesting but it’s got some stuff that need fixing and explaining.

Seems good so far would like you to add “ though as it makes it easier to read with them

After the second chapter I’m so hook for more

Can’t wait for more