Comments of chapter undefined of Hazbin Hotel/Helluvia Boss - The otherworld soul

Hazbin Hotel/Helluvia Boss - The otherworld soul

optimistic_writer

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Lonely_travelerLv10Lonely_traveler

Feel like you did the personality's for the cast Pretty spot on except i feel like husker woulda be more hostile trying to get away from the mc before he succumbed to the pets

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Lonely_travelerLv10Lonely_traveler

lol i guess your right wish my cat would let me pet it the little minx

optimistic_writer:And I would agree, but, once a cat starts getting pet, they dont fight anymore. If you re-read what I wrote, he tries resisting, but ultimately fails

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optimistic_writerAuthoroptimistic_writer

Also, seeing Alastor knows how to use runic magic, I thought it would be a good idea for him to teach the protagonist seeing the protagonist can do it too

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optimistic_writerAuthoroptimistic_writer

Ok, I did another chapter! WOOH! I tried my best to do the personalities of the main cast, which I think I did quite well, but...if you think somethings wrong then tell me! Also, I wanted to bring the cast early into the story to make it a bit more interesting! Hope you enjoyed the chapter!

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Lonely_travelerLv10Lonely_traveler

lol treating husker like a cat lol hopefully this doesn't effect angel dusts character growth really like him

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WouttLv2Woutt

Tftc

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optimistic_writerAuthoroptimistic_writer

Making the 6th chapter. I'm at 4k words, 1k words left at least.

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KaironjavisLv4Kaironjavis

Thanks for the new Chapter

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