Platofox
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I wait for the other chapters. Interesting start.
i have to say...this is an enjoyable start. am impressed...but i think you still have to proofread it...but apart from that. the concept, idea, way of writing ...everything seems intriguing and...I look forward to the next chapters.
Nice start
Buen primer capítulo. Tengo muchas ganas de que llegue el futuro. No me di cuenta de ningún error, así que genial con el señor
Nice! Looking for next chapter
Nice....
came here because it was recommend to me on a comment and it's really promising. check in later for updates
