Comments of chapter undefined of Lone Wanderer of The Wasteland

so far so good keep up the good work and don't get overwhelmed and ignore negative comments

The writing is too crammed. You should do more line-skipping.

It's OK. Too soon to comment... Let's see where this story goes.

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