says the guy with a patrion ? if this was honest you would have linked or at least mentioned the "inferior version" you can't just change some grammar, change goblin to gnome and call it something other than copy paste... this isn't highschool
I mean he's not wrong people are complaining cause they don't have talent to write. these are some of my favorite type of books so if know if it was a mindless copy. your doing awesome keep up the good work.
if you want to "improve" work that's already being translated send what you have to the people doing it originally and ask for a job or start on something that isn't spoken for