Cythiano
While I do like that something’s happening in these chapters, I feel that the pacing might be too slow. Not enough is happening. Not saying that the story is bad, I’m just saying that it feels as if it’s stagnant. It’s supposed to be a kingdom building-esque story. But there’s barely any kingdom building or relationship with Nero. I get it, you can cook. But maybe turn up the heat a little more yeah? I see promise in this story. That’s why I’m saying all this. Thanks for the chapter.
Understood, you want more heat? I definitely do have some things cooking up. The slow pacing will accelerate with the war coming up, so don't worry about that. Though, I can't promise that there won't be some slow or stagnant pacing since,y ya know, there is a slice of life tag, so do bear with some of the chapters being more... 'laid back', yeah? Anyway, I appreciate the feedback.