LuciferTheDevil767
In all honesty it's not bad I mean a lot of story's out there start slow sometimes 𤡠but then again I personally I am enjoying this work and it's not like you stayed true to the original work you've already changed quite a bit of the story why not continue what you doing using the original as a sorta timeline and brunch out from here plus I mean at any point you can write in away that he goes to different worlds to train/side story/ or do your own thing 𤡠food for thought đ¤
The story have good potential but itâs true itâs a little boring because the mc is just there and do nothing even if you said it was slice of life you could make him travel or something. And there is also the fact that I have a feeling that the chapter are rushed there is not much dialogue between the characters. But like I said the story have good potential if you find the way to make the story better